Vintage Feeling

  

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The fun fact sort of feel is really brilliant, as is the sort of faulty tape. I really wish I liked this, the color scheme's fine and I really like the general idea. But overall it just looks really forced and jumbled to me, and I'm sure the designer would argue that it was about stuttering and that was the intention but honestly I don't think it really gives that affect. It just looks jumbled and unorganized. The sketchy tape at the top doesn't help either, it's completely different from the rest of the piece and the line "Elvis Presley used to stammer as a kid" doesn't really follow anything, it would have been much stronger just left a straight line on the bottom.